38. Gus 3
Posted 28th Jan 2010, 7:30 AM
Author's Notes:
Cyborg_572
Posted on: 28th Jan 2010
And I just noticed the text in the second box is all messed up.
It's supposed to be the first judge talking and the second judge commenting. Just pretend that every time the quotes open and close it's a new indented line.
It's supposed to be the first judge talking and the second judge commenting. Just pretend that every time the quotes open and close it's a new indented line.
Comments:
Magravan
Posted on: 28th Jan 2010
It took a second to realize what was going on, but it wasn't difficult to understand :)
That is a pretty good reason for a new way to colour it, I guess it's time for a new style for the next one?
That is a pretty good reason for a new way to colour it, I guess it's time for a new style for the next one?
Linden
Posted on: 28th Jan 2010
The shape of the comic and the floor give the page a surreal feel to it. Alice in Wonderland Syndrome-like. I like the style.
Cyborg_572
Posted on: 28th Jan 2010
Also, I don't think I'll be colouring with pencil again any time soon. It makes cleaning things up on the computer so much harder, because I can't just scan in in line-art mode.
As always, I'm experimenting, and your critique is much appreciated.